Monday Has Arrived!

. . . And so has November. The holidays are upon us, and soon 2019 will be history. I thank you for joining me on this happy, November Monday. The winds are much colder; the sun a little more absent. The white stuff that appeared over the weekend has disappeared, but I know more is coming. That sounds like a good recipe for writing. Cozy up by the fire with a cup of whatever and your keyboard, and get to it!

This week’s Featured Excerpt is taken from Ruby Jean Richert’s A Day Alone Sitting On A Park Bench Proves To Be Enlightening. Drop her a comment and let her know what you think. Grab your thinking cap and help me think through This Week’s Question??? as well.

As I continue to explore the whys and how tos of writing I occasionally come across something I think is worth sharing. I’ve always been one of those writers that flies by the seat of his pants. I don’t use outlines. I usually begin with a beginning and ending thought and fill in the blank pages in between as I go.

But I’m trying something different with my new project, The Marisol Deception. I came across a writing program called Freewriter. It’s similar to Scrivener, but as the name suggests, it’s free.

I thought I’d try it on my new novel, and it has worked beautifully and really has helped in the development of the story. The suite contains a browser – no more switching tabs when i want to do research. There is a spellchecker (but not as effective as Grammarly which I usually use), a thesaurus and dictionary, productivity goals and wordcounts, just to name a few.

The thought canvas is what has really been helpful for me. It allows me to post virtual stickies with future thoughts, index cards as potential outlines, and allows it all to be seen in a separate screen as I write. I can map out my characters with more clarity, keep track of scenes even if I won’t be using them for several chapters, and develop settings in detail. On top of that, it’s even kind of fun.

How much it will keep me from flying by the seat of pants, I don’t know, but it does seem like it has made the writing process easier and more flowing. Here’s a link for you to try Check it out and let me know what you think. It may not be for everybody. I’m not even sure it’s for me every time, but for now, it seems to be working. If you need more information, let me know, but it’s certainly worth checking out.

Until next Monday . . .


It’s November

It gets no better than Pennsylvania in the fall.

The first Monday of November and there’s much to discuss, so let’s get started.

November brings many things including this year’s peak season for fall foliage. It’sw absolutely beautiful , and I love this time of year. November also brings the start of the holiday season with Thanksgiving. It’s a wonderful time, but shouldn’t be the only time we focus on the blessings and gifts that God has given us.

It also brings us to the National Novel Writing Month or NaNoWriMo as it’s oftern called. NaNoWriMo was started by freelancer Chris Baty in San Fransisco in 1999 with 21 participants. The numbers have grown over the years to more than 200,000. You can learn more by going to the site.

November is also the month I started my new novel The Marisol Deception, (although it won’t be entered in NaNoWriMO). Cadeyrn’s Tale is now off to the editor for the final touches.

The Marisol Deception is purely fictional but is based on the apacolyptic events in the Bible book of Revelation. I’ve set my deadline is for April, 2020. You can read Part 1 of the rough draft here.

A tip for this week – I’ll make it short as I’ve already gone on too long. Surround yourself with good writers that can give you both positive and negative feedback. In our social media age, people are too kind. On HubPages I have to ask for constructive critcism, and even then, I don’t always get it. Positive is good, but unless you’re willing to face the good, the bad, and the ugly, very little progress will ever be made.

So I’m asking you to go back and read Part 1 of the HP rough draft and honestly let me know how I can improve. You can leave your thoughts on the Comments section of HubPages or just add them below in the MVOWC Comments section. I’m willing to do the same for you.

Well, next Monday will be here soon enough, so I’ll leave you for now. See you then!


Moving Ahead

Cover photo from Cadeyrn’s Tale

Is it really Monday already? Yep, I guess it is! The next few months will be filled with busyness as the holidays approach. I love this time of year. The fall colors and gentle breezes speak of the storms of winter on the horizon. That’s okay. Spring follows.

Be sure to check out the excerpt and this week’s question and leave some comments. I always like hearing from you.

The rough draft of Cadeyrn’s Tale is finished. Now, the real work begins. Hopefully, it will be completed and available for your bookshelf by the end of November.

It was fun to write. It’s set in 5th-century Ireland – a time period I love. During my research for the story I discovered that there is some evidence that leprechauns and fairies really existed. There are supposedly forests and fields where the wee folk rule even today. Do I really believe that? No. But then again, nothing is beyond the realm of possibility.

Something else that I discovered, and I do believe this to be fact. Snakes have never inhabited Ireland. The legend says that St. Patrick drove the snakes from Ireland, but apparently there were never any snakes to be driven out. I wish the forests of Pennsylvania were more like that. I love to hike the back-country and well . . . I wish St. Patrick was here.

My next project is entitled, The Marisol Deception. It’s in infant form at this stage, but you’ll soon be able to catch the rough draft on HubPages. I’ll let you know more about both Cadeyrn’s Tale and The Marisol Deception as time goes on.

I am also editing my wife’s newest poetry book, Sweetest Jesus: Volume Two. Hopefully, that will be ready to go soon. She has a lot of new poetry worth reading. No doubt, I will be featuring some on the Excerpt page from time to time.

Next week, we’ll get back to some writing tips for you. Until then – Keep on writing.

Home, Sweet Home!

After taking a brief vacation, celebraing 39 years of marriage, It’s good to be back home.

Welcome to my Monday – which, by the way, is your Monday, too. I think it’s wonderful how our paths cross. You’re a part of my life while at the same time, I’m a part of yours, and I thank you for that privilege.

First, just let me say that the new new question for the week is up along with the new excerpt, My Shepherd’s Love, written by my wife. Check them out.

Now, let me ask you a question. When you choose a setting for your story, what do you consider? How much research do you do in building the setting? How realistic do you try to make it. Hopefully, your answer is, very realistic.

Even though you may be involved in writing a fiction story, to make it a believable story, you must include certain facts – at least if your story takes place in a realistic place. Of course, if you’re writing fantasy, you’re free to build your own land and suroundings.

Over the past several books, I’ve noticed different ways I’ve developed the settings. Let me know what you think works the best in the comments below.

Winch-Hunt – The setting is a fictiouse town, Sandy Hill, Maine. The story is built around a lighthouse on Lake Erie that I’ve had the pleasure of exp;oring, but it’s placed in Sandy Hill. Sandy Hill does not exist as a town, but to make the story more believable, I had to research the Maine coast since I have never had the opportunity to visit Maine. Totally fictional, although I had to add research to make it seem real.

The Voice – Again, the town of Lafayette was, in a sense, fictional. I chose the name Lafayette because it seems that just about every state has a Lafayette. I deliberately kept the details vague, which allowed the reader to imagine the Lafayett they may most likely be familair with.

Dear Ellie – This was different for me. The story takes place in three different locations. One, my hometown, of which I am very familiar. Two, another location was in a neighborhood where my cousin lived many years ago. The third location, Brownsville, had to be researched and is based on an actual location that I have never seen. The first two needed little to no research. The third needed much research as a real location, known by real people, was used.

Manchan’s Tale and Cadeyrn’s Tale – Both are set in 4th century Ireland. You better believe more time was given to research, especially Manchan’s Tale, than any other. The Celts ruled Ireland at this time and were heavily involved in magic. That allowed for magical things to happen, but the setting still had to be as accurate as possible.

Jacob’s Ladder and Stage (f)Right – My first two books were largely built around my own life, something that is quite common with new authors. It’s what I know best so it’s the easiest to write about. Jacob’s Ladder began as a journal. Most of the beginning is built around facts, but later the setting shifts to Colorado – neve been there, So it called for research. I might add, don’t we as authors quite frequently interject our own personalities into our characters?

Okay, so just some different ways to think about setting. How do you develop the setting for your stories?

It’s All in the Past

An Irish Moor. If  you look close, you just might see Cadeyrn.

Monday! Monday! Yes, it’s that time again. The rain is pouring and the cooler fall weather is here – my favorite time of the year. I have some more writing thoughts for you, but first, let me mention the site updates. Eric Dierker’s excerpt is up. If you want to be blessed, be sure to read it. Leave a comment as well. I’m sure he’d love to hear from you. The new questions are up, too. Give them some thought.

Next week, I will be away with my honey as we celebrate 39 years of marriage. She will have my full attention so you won’t be hearing from me until the following week. But never fear – I’ll be back. Now, let’s move on.

My newest project, Cadeyrn’s Tale, is set in the 4th century AD in Ireland. That qualifies it for historical fiction. Have you ever written or tried to write historical fiction? I’m no expert, but let me give you ou some tips.

Research is Necessary

The mere fact that you are writing a fiction story says that your work is not true and factual. Still, if it is to be believable, there must be a realistic sense to your piece. That calls for research. How did people live? What were their occupations? How did they eat, sleep? In what kind of entertainment did they indulge? The list goes on. As best as you can, you must be accurate in representing the period of time you are visiting. That takes time. That takes discipline, but it must be done.

Watch the Fun Facts

You no doubt will come across many tidbits of information as you research your topic. It’s okay to note these tidbits, but don’t overdo it. Stay with the main facts. To overload your readers with a lot of unnecessary detail will only facilitate boredom. Remember, you’re writing a story, not a fun facts book. Make sure the detail you use is needed to move the plot and your characters forward. And above all, show – don’t tell.

Make Sure You Tell a Story

It’s way too easy to get absorbed in the facts, the culture of the period you are writing, the nuances of the day. And it’s way too easy to just lay down facts with no solid story. Your protagnoist needs to be able to carry the entire piece from beginning to end amid conflicts and problems to keep your readers entertained to the end.

Romance! Romance! Romance!

Have you ever written, or tried to write a romance novel or short story? Personally, it’s not my thing. The closest I come to a romance write is in my latest story, Cadeyrn’s Tale, but I’d hardly call it a romance story.

Still, there are some things to consider when writing romance. I think it goes without saying, you need two characters that fall in love. Along with the characters, there needs to be a major obstacle that lies in the path of their love. Quite often, the two don’t even realize they are in love until that obstacle reveals it to them.

For some reason, I think of Hallmark romance movies. I don’t mind saying they are too predictable, but they do use the elements of good romance. Consider the following:

  1. One of the characters is in a relationship with someone else.
  2. One of the characters’ family disapproves of the relationship and threatens to cut the character off.
  3. One of the characters misunderstands the kind of person the other character is and initially dislikes him/her (e.g., character is very shy or nervous but it comes across as rude and arrogant).
  4.  Character X suspects that Character Y is planning or has committed a crime — the more Character X finds out, the more dangerous the situation becomes. (rarely used in Hallmark)

 So you’ve developed your two characters and given them a sizable problem to overcome. To make a story, one more thing is needed – a reason for them to work with each other to overcome the problem and work things out. Many times in real life situatios we see couples simply give up and move on. This is a sad situation, but it really doesn’t make for good reading – or writing. There must be a common goal of sorts for them to overcome.

Often one of the two characters is in love with someone else and it must be drawn out to reveal the true love between your characters. However, often there are outside circumstances that intrude upon the lovers. Think about these.

1. One of the characters works for the other (Think the overused nanny falls in love with her employer).

2. Character X is a detective investigating Character Y. The possibilities here are without number.

3. Character X has an accident or is in danger and Character Y has no choice but to take care of him/her.

The trick is make the story unique. These examples have been used over and over and given the first few chapters, the end of the story can easily be concluded. But again, that doesn’t make for good writing. Create your unique characters. Give them a unique obstacle. Give them a unique reason to stay together, and you’ll no doubt have a winner.

Searching for Conflict

As important as character development and plotting may be, without a conflict to drive the story forward – well, there really is no story. So here are some ideas to help you find a page-turning conflict.

Consider what kind of conflict your story will include. Although some may overlap at times, there are seven basic kinds of conflict. You’ll need to know what your driving conflict is as much as you know your characters and the plot. No doubt, your story’s conflict will fit into one of these categories. When planning the conflict for your story consider one of these areas.

  • Man vs. Self – This may arguably be the most intense form of conflict, but yet most can identify with it. Everything rides on the outcome.
  • Man vs. Man – No doubt, this is the most common form of conflict, and the odds are increased as there are more than one person placed at risk – even if that person is the villain of your story.
  • Man vs. Society – A much bigger scope with much to lose if your character is unsuccessful.
  • Man vs. Nature – Raw nature is very powerful and must be overcome by an equal if not superior power to survive.
  • Man vs. Machine – Of course somewhere along the line, a man invented the machine that is causing conflict. It pits intelligence against intelligence. In today’s world, technolgy is hard to beat.
  • Man vs. Fate/Supernatural – This leaves the door opened for so many possibilies. What will be will be – or will it?
  • Man vs. the unknown – Think outer space aliens. Think unexplored wilderness, which may also include nature. Think about the future.

If readers care about the result of your story conflict, they will keep reading to find out what happens. So the obvious question is, What makes readers care? I believe this is the reason your readers will care. The readers identify with your character — in other words, readers imagine themselves in your character’s place. Readers tend to identify with the viewpoint character and feel as if they’re resolving the story’s conflict along with him or her. They’ve not resolved the conflict until your character does.

Here are some ways to turn a character idea into an idea for conflict. And the good thing is you can use these ideas over and over in different combinations to create new characters and conflicts. 

  • Is there something your character desires or wants to accomplish? Imagine that  your character is in a position to obtain his desire, but what are the roadblocks that easily prevent him/her from doing so.
  • Give your character an important goal to reach, and give her/him a deep-seated fear that s/he will have to face to make the goal. 
  • Give your character someone to hate. Then involve the two in a struggle (possibly a struggle that will change both of them).
  • Imagine the opposite. Who is someone your character loves?  Imagine a situation which threatens to cut your character off from this person.  What is the response of your character?
  • Give your character a major weakness. Then involve him a pursuit that if he is to acheive it, s/he must overcome the weakness.
  • Put your character in a situation that s/he doesn’t know about himself  or herself and s/he is about to ruin his or her life, unless the character is capable of making drastic changes.
  • Give your character two or more people to deeply care about. What happens when you introcuce a situation in which your character must choose between one or another.

Give some things a try. Let me know how you make out!

A Little Character Goes a Long Way

Things are back on track. I apologize for not being here the last couple of weeks. I just needed a little time to regroup and get my thoughts straight. Anyway, here are my thoughts for this week. I want to talk to you about making characters lovable.

Most of the time, you want your readers to love your characters with a possible exception being your villain. Let me give you three things that will help your characters be likable in your readers eyes. The simple truth is if your readers care about your characters, they will certainly care about what happens to them, and they’ll feel invested in your story.

You probably don’t want your protagonist coming off as sickening sweet, but we certainly want our readers to like him/her.

Perhaps the obvious way to show off your character as likable is to show them doing something kind for somebody. It could be something as simple as showing sensitivity in a conversation with another character. But if you really want your character to shine, show him giving in a self-sacrificial way. Maybe put him in a position to take a beating for someone else, a physically weaker character – maybe have him take the blame for a crime she didn’t commit to spare someone else the pain of prison. But be careful. Your reader also expects justice to be served.

A second way you might make your character likable is to make him an underdog. Everyone loves an underdog. Page by page you can stack the odds against her, and when she comes shining forth as gold. your readers will love her all the more. A possible twist might allow the character to lose his own life in the process – self-sacrificing kindness and the underdog rolled into one. Samson in the Bible, an underdog at the time, sacrificed his life so justice could be served against his evil antagonists.

Thirdly, giving your character, especially your protagonist, a great ability to love usually endears him/her to your reading audience. Certainly, a romance novel would fit into this category, but I’m talking so much more. Perhaps it could be an inseparable friendship. The biblical Jonathan and David fit into this category. A deep love for animals or pets will also work – but please, no Lassie.

These are just some quick thoughts to get you on your way. See what you can do with the ideas and let me know what you think. Have a great week!

Getting Endorsements for Your Book

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I subscribe to Author Randy Ingermanson’s newsletter. You may want to, too (see the above link). With permission, I’m reprinting his thoughts on book endorsements.

Endorsements are the short blurbs for your book, typically written by other authors, that show up in the front matter for your book and on your book’s sales page on the online retailers. . .

. . . My reason for thinking that endorsements matter is that I have, in the past, paid attention to a book if it had a strong endorsement on it. When I say that I “paid attention” to the book, I mean that I took a look at the product description, and if that sounded interesting, I opened the book and read the first chapter to see if it was up to snuff. But if the quality was poor, I didn’t buy the book, no matter how glowing the endorsements.

And if the cover was off, or the price was way out of line, I probably never even got far enough to see the endorsements in the first place.

Assuming Everything Else is Right, Then What?

So assuming that you’ve got a well-written book, a strong cover, a reasonable price, and a great product description, how do you line up endorsements?

What do you have to do in order to get some other author to endorse your book?

Let’s turn that around.

Suppose you’re a reasonably successful author, and you get a request from another author to endorse their book. Why might you say yes? And why might you say no?

Reasons You’d Say Yes

You might agree to endorse a book for a variety of reasons:

  • You already know the author who’s asking for the endorsement.
  • You’ve heard of the author and know he or she has a good reputation.
  • The book sounds REALLY interesting.
  • The book sounds like it’s going to sell extremely well, which means that endorsers for the book will automatically get some free publicity.
  • You just want to help out another author.
  • Probably other reasons.

Reasons You’d Say No

You might decline to endorse a book for a variety of reasons:

  • You’re under massive time pressure and you just don’t have six or eight or ten hours to read this book right now.
  • You never heard of the author, and they approach you in a weird way that makes you feel like they have an entitlement mentality and don’t realize they’re asking you to do them a big favor.
  • The book has a terrible title or a terrible cover, or it’s in a category you hate, or it’s presenting a message that you violently oppose.
  • The book just doesn’t sound like something you’d want to read.
  • You read the first few chapters of the book and realized that the quality is not something you feel comfortable endorsing.
  • Probably other reasons.

Lining Up the Endorsements

So how do you line up endorsements? Here are the key elements that I think should go into your game plan:

  • Get your ducks in a row. You need to have Advance Reader Copies (ARCs) of your book ready to send out to potential endorsers in several electronic formats—at least PDF, and if possible also a Kindle version and an ePub version. You might also have paper ARCs. If you’re traditionally published, your publisher will often create paper ARCs specifically to send to potential endorsers. You don’t need to have the cover designed yet.
  • Always, always, always keep in mind that other authors are busy and you are asking for a big favor. So remember going into this that some authors will not have the time, and that you need to respect their right to not have time.
  • Make a list of authors who might potentially be willing to endorse your book. Some of these might be very likely. Others might be very unlikely. But there should be a reason why you’d want to ask each one of them.
  • Sort them into groups: most likely to say yes, moderately likely to say yes, and most likely to say no.
  • Start with the group of most likely candidates and write an e-mail customized to each one, asking if they’re willing to read an Advance Reader Copy for possible endorsement.
  • If things go well with the first group, send e-mails to your next group—the less-likely candidates. (If things don’t go well with the first group, you probably need to rethink your approach.)
  • If things also go well with the second group, then send e-mails to the group of least-likely candidates.

What Goes In That E-mail

You may be thinking that I’ve left out something very important—exactly how to make that crucial “ask” in the e-mail.

You’re right. Asking is hard.There’s a lot to say about it, more than would fit in the bullet points above.

So how do you ask for an endorsement? Here’s how:

Remember that you are asking for a big, big favor. Nobody owes you this big of a favor, so you should expect that some people will say no. If they say yes, it’s going to cost them a fair bit of time and effort, and they may just not have it right now.

For each author you approach, you need to personalize your e-mail so it’s clear that you’re not simply shotgunning out a million requests. Think about how well you know this author. Think about what they like to read, and why they might be willing to read your book. Think about what’s in this book for them, particularly. And also think about why they might have to say no.

Then write the e-mail and make it personal! It must not be a form letter. Write it in a way that shows you’re thinking about their particular situation in life. If there’s something in the book they’ll love, say what it is. But make it clear that you know it’s going to cost them time and effort to read your book. Show that you appreciate them.

Make it clear that you completely understand that they might not be able to write an endorsement. And also make it clear that you’re not asking them to promise an endorsement up front. You’re asking them to read the book for possible endorsement—meaning that they might read part of it and then decide to say no.

Never, ever, ever offer money or any other inducement. Endorsements are not for sale. Endorsements need to be freely given. You wouldn’t offer your mother payment for making a great Thanksgiving dinner. You’d offer appreciatiation . . .

Which POV – 1st or 3rd Person?

I’m working on my seventh fiction story and hoping to have it published sometime within the next two months. It’s entitled, Cadeyrn’s Tale. I generally write in the third person, but I’ve chosen to write this particular piece in the first person. It seemed best to me that Cadeyrn tells his own story.

First person POV isn’t right for every story, therefore it’s necessary to determine if it’s right for your story. Most commonly, first person narrative is found in young adult writing and youthful romantic comedies. But it most certainly can be used in other genres as well. To Kill a Mockingbird is but one example.

Determine if it’s Right for Your Story

What really needs to be considered is what is best for your story. Generally, first person allows your readers to become more acquainted and closer to the narrator. It allows the reader to get into the character’s head – but only his. Third person allows the reader to get into any character’s head. Consider that when deciding POV.

Choose a Tense

The choice of tense isn’t important, but do your best to keep it consistent throughout. Much of the time first person is told in the present tense, but it can work well using past tense also. You can begin in the present, as I did in Cadeyrn’s Tale, and go back to the past as the narrator tells the story from beginning to present. First person also works well with memoirs.

Purpose is Key

Remember that first person is more than a story, more than just an interesting plot. There is a reason the narrator is telling his/her own story. There is a message they want you to receive. Your reader wants to read the unique POV of this person. Why is your character telling this story? The story belongs to them so it must be more than just sharing facts amongst the plot. What is it that is compelling your narrator to tell you their story?

Have fun with it, but keep it all in perspective. First person isn’t right for every story. You, the author determines its effectivenss.